Use your find tool and search for words like saw, felt, think, thoughts, wondered, believe, and watched. You may find others as well. Sometimes you may find sentences that are in the first person using the above words. Make sure you genuinely need them. Look at the following sentences.
- I don’t see why we have to go to bed and Jim doesn’t.
- Why do we have to go to bed and Jim doesn’t?
Did you notice that we just took off another three words? The reader can feel the characters feeling of injustice without having to tell them.